UNBELIEVABLE!
Signs of Life in
YOUR STORY

Stories designed to inspire empathy and understanding across diverse readers. This website is currently under construction. Lillian Finsel Works is pleased to show current work with a desire to collaborate. Here is a current work in progress that has not been run through the technical software. Feel free to jump in and work with us!

VOICE OVER (V.O)

CHARACTERS

The Waiter is a surfer boy with a man bun and red glasses. Tilts his nose to the sky constantly, his pants are loose up top and tight on the bottom.
Tom is shorter than the grill tickets so you can see him perfectly, all white outfit, sweating, uses his hands to gesture gracefully.
Mr. Handey in a black suit and black tie and black shoes and white shirt. Glasses, very still, has a napkin in his coat pocket.
Jim Mcdonald six-foot tall, one green converse shoe, one red converse shoe on the other foot. Very tired, rolls his eyes often. Half blonde-half brown mohawked and smoking something.
Alex slightly shorter than Jim, perfectly spiked hair, blue eyes, huge smile, his teeth never touch. Always looks like he is jumping into a scene.
V.O. Sounds like a man who sucked helium.

                                    [Scene I]
Old school television static and all with rabbit ears tunes into a black screen and a voice begins...

V.O.    What about Jim McDonald? What about Brushbourne Minatures? People these days. Take Tom, the previous chef at Harbor View in (2021).

Text appears [He is like, "Oh. Well. You know."]

V.o.     He is like, "Oh. Well. You know."

                                    [Scene II]
Seagulls swoop in for French fries off of a waiter who is a man with a manbun. He shouts.
                                    
                                    [Scene III]
The grill cook TOM is staring straight forward and some tickets are visible, the top of the waiters' hair from behind is also visible.
    
    WAITER:     What are the specials today, Tom?

    TOM:         Oh. Well. You know.

V.O.     Some people just spend all day processing TOM saying this! But there is more to Ol' McDonald. Brushbourne Minatures! Hey! You are focusing on the small stuff! Let me take the wheel. I am a certified professional that will take your words and turn them INTO GOLD. THAT'S what matters when Lillian Finsel Works. You will stand tall, you will move motions of waves over what others call MOUNTAINS!!

                                    [Scene IV]
In a quaint town nestled in the Blue Mountains of Pennsylvania is a corncob field that two students look at from the high school parking lot. There are people with bicycles jumping up and down, a white tall boy with brown and blonde dreadlocks. And the school representative MR. HANDEY.

    JIM:    Yes. I know. He had a farm. Trust me, I know.

    ALEX:        What kind of farm did he have Jim?!

    JIM:    I don't want to talk about this...

Intercepted in conversation Mr. Handey is on a board with casters underneath that slide him into the scene.

    MR. HANDEY:    O.K. so this is how you crooked people process new students.

    ALEX:     What are you talking about new students?

    MR. HANDEY:    I seem to have gotten myself into something here.

    JIM:    Mr. Handey, this is my biggest pleasure to introduce to you my, ahem, my little brother.

    MR. HANDEY:    I apologize for any inconvenience Mr. McDonald.